Thursday, February 28, 2008

Chapter 4: BENJAMIN CROWE - part 8

  INT. LIQUOR STORE - EVENING 



Ben is inspecting the windows when Dave comes in and stands
beside him.



BENJAMIN CROWE
You don't have some kind of gate or
something to cover these when you
close?


DAVE
No need.
(knocks on the window)
Bullet proof glass. Had it
installed last summer.


BENJAMIN CROWE
Okay.
(he hesitates)
I'll be right back.


Ben makes for the door.


DAVE
Where the hell you going?


BENJAMIN CROWE
We can't just leave that kid out
there.


DAVE
You mean Steve?


Ben gives him a blank stare.


DAVE
The kid that just crashed your
vehicle into a light post while
trying to steal it?


BENJAMIN CROWE
Yeah, him.


Ben exits the liquor store.


EXT. DESERTED MAIN STREET - EVENING


Ben walks briskly down the street as Dave struggles to catch
up.


DAVE
You're better off leaving the punk
to rot, if ya ask me.


BENJAMIN CROWE
I'm not gonna leave him out here to
die just cause he tried to steal my
car.


DAVE
You car? Do you know how much money
that little shit and his friends
have cost me over the years? Shit,
they're the reason I had to install
the bullet proof glass.


BENJAMIN CROWE
Well, I can carry him myself if you
wanna head back to the store.


The two come upon the overturned SUV to find Steve is still
unconscious when Ben and Dave arrive at the truck. Ben
crouches down to check Steve's pulse.


DAVE (O.C.)
I don't think you get what I'm
sayin'.


Ben looks up to see that Dave has a gun pointed at his
forehead.


DAVE (cont'd)
The boy ain't welcome in my store.


Ben puts his hands in the air to signal his surrender.

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Anonymous said...

What's the deal? Any chance we're gonna get an ending to this story?

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Anonymous said...

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