EXT. KROON LAKE - DAY
Sarah is sprawled out on the pontoon boat's deck while Ben
has his feet up on the bench seat with his baseball cap
pulled down over his face.
Josh is fishing from a small inflatable raft attached to a
ten foot rope at the back of the boat.
SARAH HAWKINS
So is your Dad always like that?
BENJAMIN CROWE
Like what?
SARAH HAWKINS
I don't know, like, so paranoid and
whatever. That whole thing with the
cell phone before we left was kinda
weird.
Ben puts his hat back on the top of his head and sits up
straighter.
BENJAMIN CROWE
Yeah, it was wasn't it? I don't
know, I guess he's been kinda weird
ever since he told me I had to come
up here.
SARAH HAWKINS
Had to come up here? What is this
some kind punishment?
BENJAMIN CROWE
I guess so.
SARAH HAWKINS
That's harsh. What'd you do?
BENJAMIN CROWE
A lot.
Ben spots the cooler and gets excited when he remembers Jim's
wink at the dock.
He pulls it closer to him and rips it open before digging
through the ice.
SARAH HAWKINS
Jesus, hungry much?
BENJAMIN CROWE
I think your Dad put beer in here.
SARAH HAWKINS
Seriously?
BENJAMIN CROWE
I knew it.
Ben holds up a beer.
SARAH HAWKINS
Are there more?
Ben digs through the ice again and pulls his hand back out
disappointed.
SARAH HAWKINS (cont'd)
What, that's it?
BENJAMIN CROWE
There's three more.
SARAH HAWKINS
He gave us four beers? What are we
supposed to do with that?
BENJAMIN CROWE
You want one? Maybe if we drink'em
really, really fast we'll get a
mild buzz.
SARAH HAWKINS
I got a better idea.
Sarah gets up from and makes her way to the bench seat across
from Ben.
Sarah pulls out a bottle of vodka and two shot glasses.
BENJAMIN CROWE
This weekend might not be so bad
after all.
COMMENTARY: It was kinda weird I sat down at the computer with no real drive to write anything and just sort of hammered this out pretty quickly. I got through most of part three as well so expect that over the weekend. I kinda feel like I haven't really been fleshing my characters out as well as I could be and hopefully this will be the chapter that I change that. Oh yeah, do me a favor and click here to vote for my blog on the World's Best Zombie Sites List.
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